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 Carol Lalala |
Kitty soft paw |
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17 May, 2007 22:38 |
Kitty soft paw, you're so small padding down the long, dark hall Your ears are tuned to every sound the long, lost ball newly found You hop, you twirl, you chase your tail You stretch and flex your every nail. Now it's time to curl around to take your nap safe and sound.
Last Edited By: met111 18 May, 2007 09:05.
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met111 |
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18 May, 2007 09:04 one 1 won
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Carol that's great! ... really ... its my new favorite .... very elegant, very serene ... has this understated sense of wonder too hope you put some more poems up here, whenever the word, the mood, strikes you .... And he sings 'They break the most beautiful things But I hear violins, when I close my eyes I am at the center of the sun And I cannot be hurt By anything this wicked world has done Conjure 1
ki meela ( K ee Mee lah) (means what'd you
get??)
Last Edited By: met111 18 May, 2007 09:07.
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Carol Lalala |
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18 May, 2007 11:34 |
Thanks, Met!
 I was pleased with it too. Kinda sounds like a nursery
rhyme, doesn't it? My new kitten was sleeping on the desk in front of me last night while I was checking this forum out and so I just typed up a new poem.
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18 May, 2007 13:10 "what did you get?"
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I LOVE IT! I wanna kitty Met! It's so descriptive and wonderous. It catches the motion of 'catness.'
That's the way to do it Carol! Most - actually all the poems I have here on line were just typed in - edited some of them, but they were all created on the sprr of the moment. Go with your feelings and let the words go. I can't wait to see more. I am beautiful no matter what they say Words can't bring me down I am beautiful in every single way Yes, words can't bring me down Oh no, so don't you bring me down today |
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19 May, 2007 00:10 |
You guys are always so gosh darn encouraging all the time.
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19 May, 2007 10:33 "what did you get?"
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From what I have seen from you so far Carol I would say that you have things worth saying. This poem is a gift and I love that you took a moment to write that.
One begins to see the value of our lives and our world when we can express it. You have a story to tell girl and I want to hear it.
I would encourage anyone who wants or dreamed of writing. If you have that dream, urge or whatever - it means you have a story to tell. God puts the desire in our hearts and it is up to us to follow that call of the moment. I've lived through too many years where I thought that my desire to be an artist was a selfish call for attention. Now I realize that it is God who urges me to express my life so that others can see the value of their own world in it. It takes real courage to write because one has to put away negative thoughts and embrace the positive gifts that God has given us. First of all a life. Second of all the ways and the means to live this life. We are the ones who hold ourselves back thinking that we need to be modest before God. But God lives in us and is calling for us to speak. So you have spoken. Simply, humbly and powerfully. I am beautiful no matter what they say Words can't bring me down I am beautiful in every single way Yes, words can't bring me down Oh no, so don't you bring me down today |
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28 May, 2007 05:11 |
kitties!!! =)
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28 May, 2007 10:53 |
Ki Meela wrote: She does indeed. Carol is a beautiful wise sistah.  (the sister I
always wish I had, I only got a brother, but he's cool in his own special way.)
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28 May, 2007 10:54 |
Carol Lalala wrote: This is delightful. 
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28 May, 2007 11:02 |
Ki Meela wrote: Aw, this beautiful and encouraging, thanks Ki.
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